Fatal- Opening Title Sequence from Emily Apps on Vimeo.
After editing our first group of footage we had a rough cut of out OTS. This version had no music and limited titles. Our class mates watched the film twice and gave us some useful feedback:
Effective points
- Our lighting and contrast
- Seductive themes
- Interesting enigma
- General aesthetic of the two actors
Points to improve upon
- Continuity
- One shaky shot
- Audio glitch
- Add titles and music
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